I have plotted the chapter and now must decide if I bring in the two new characters (albeit very small roles) - one to travel with Richard and the aunt/governess with Susan. Rawlings has Logan. I also have experimented with the sex scene and decided to show Elizabeth thoughts and less explicit graphics. She will turn her head but constantly return to watching.
naughty gayle.
Chapter 3 is all about America and our lovebirds, whoever they are hooked up with.
but for now I shall complete chapter 2 called dinners.
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