Ok, I tested the waters with my Wretched Beginning Turning Point (WB&TP) post yesterday. I have to do a sex scene in Chapter 2 and so I tried my hand with yesterday's post. I gave a very explicit detail of teenagers first attempt. Teens are so intent on the "act" that they forget to talk. The guys have not mastered that art until years of practice are under their belt - so to speak. And beside they don't need the words, girls do. But in my example yesterday, I imagine Eliza was shocked by her own reactions that she did not know what to say. Thomas was a gentleman and at least asked permission as he moved further.
I have decided it was too much detail for the readers so back to the drawing board for my sequel to Exp. Now some liked it but the silence casts a vote as well. It could be that the readers did not like what I did with Thomas Bennet. *shrugs*
I will have one graphic sex scene in the story but it will come later. In fact there really are only three sex scenes total. I will experiment a little more. I need to write a true love scene where passion and love come together.
well, off to do other things as I think about what must be done. lol
till next time
gayle
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